the only thing i think could improve this is actual lip syncing for the characters other than the goddess i feel the fact hey don't move they're mouths makes those parts rely a tiny bit more on the sound instead of the animation, but i think you did an amazing job on the artwork, the actions in the fighting scenes and story i like the little twist at the end.
this is really good the artwork looks awesome, the only thing i can say that would improve this is to include some secondary actions when characters aren't moving, nothing to crazy maybe even a trace over so that the characters aren't so still just to give them a lil bit more life to them when they aren't moving.
this looks awesome the way you animated the cape looks great, although i must confess it felt a little slow, but that's just how i felt, great job
pretty awesome job man. i thought it was a little choppy but overall this put a smile on my face. all i can say is maybe make the animation a bit smoother
you brilliant bastard you
if i'm being completley honest i think this could use some work, some of the corpses looked halfed assed to me, i could see each layer clearly overlapping which made it look out of place, same go for the audio it just sounds like you recorded all of it with a mic and distorted the shit out of it and forgot to actually make it fit in, i still think it's pretty cool and hey, at least you're doing something, i dig the whole drugged out bar blues thing i hope you don't think i'm bashing you but i really think it need more polish
starts out with kinda lame jokes but the argument is funny
mastermind needs his own show
no joke this series is hilliarous
dat waz random rofl
come on man
i know this is only a test vid but you can put more effort into it i'd like it if the animation were better, nice ideal but not so good effort sorry try again
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